(click on the link to read the story online)
This turned out to be a very strange story – and I mean ‘strange’ in a very positive way, of course – one that started as something with a somber mood: the opening brings us to a small pub in the Red Lights district of Amsterdam, where a woman is waiting for someone. The description of the rainy night and the people moving past the pub’s windows on their various errands puts the background into sharp focus and it quickly drew me in, thanks to what I like to call “cinematic quality” in writing.
Quite soon, though, the story’s atmosphere changes, and that happens when the waiting woman fingers the gun in her pocket – a gun that’s “fifty years more advanced than anything else in this time zone” – and the man she’s waiting for appears. She’s there to kill him, and he’s aware of the fact.
I’m not going to tell you more about Red Lights, and Rain, because it’s the kind of story that begs to be read with no foreknowledge: the only thing I feel comfortable sharing is the consideration underlying the narrative – what is a monster? Is it the creature whose only motivation is to kill, the one that is driven to spill innocent blood, or is it the one that acted as creator and sent it on the path of destruction? In the end I found myself echoing the words of the young man managing the pub, “you are a monster”. Indeed…
My Rating:
Wow, another short story that I’m going to have to bookmark (since I’m at work I probably shouldn’t read it now!). This sounds really good, although I’m not familiar with this author. Thank you for sharing!
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You’re welcome! He’s new to me as well, as are many of the writers I encounter on those sites: who knows, a good number of them might pop up soon with some wonderful debut novel… 🙂
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After hosting the author’s guest post on my site and learning about his new book about a sentient ship, his works have landed on my radar again. I just realized I’ve had his book Ack Ack Macaque on my TBR for the longest time, but this is the first I’ve heard of this cool short story!
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Oh my goodness! I had not made the connection yet! (old age does that to you, sadly… 😀 )
He’s the author of Embers of War, and that story sounds more than promising!
Which means I’m not going to wait too long to read it…. 🙂
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This sounds really cool. I’ve not read this author yet but I like the sound of this and the setting really appeals to me – I’ve been to Amsterdam and reading a short story based there has me intrigued.
Lynn 😀
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Yes, he caught perfectly the feel of the city and it atmosphere, and in a such a short story that indicates some great skills. An author to keep on one’s radar, indeed… 🙂
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OK, now I’m interested 🙂 Sounds really good
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Happy reading, then! 🙂
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You’ve got me intrigued without saying much, which is a real feat! I love the idea of a woman waiting in a pub to kill a man…and him arriving, knowing her intentions. What could have gone down between them? 🤔
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Ah, my lips are sealed! I will not reveal their secret for al the tea in China! 😀 😀
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Oooh. Having just read Embers of War, I’m right here for short stories by Mr Powell 😀
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I had not made the connection until Mogsy pointed it out to me, so I made it a point to read Embers of War as soon as I could: it’s funny how we went at it from different angles and found some great writing 🙂
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