Review: BENEATH THE SUGAR SKY (Wayward Children #3), by Seanan McGuire



This third installment in Seanan McGuire’s Wayward Children series takes us in a very different direction if compared with its predecessors: where the other stories were based on oddity and darkness, Beneath the Sugar Sky strives for a lighter mood even though the core concept still carries a dramatic vein, but for this reason it does not seem to work as well as the previous tales, at least from my point of view.

We’re back at Eleanor West’s school where we meet a new character, Cora, who used to dwell in the Trenches as a mermaid: together with her friend Nadya – who comes from a different water world – she’s spending time near the school’s pond when a girl literally splashes out of nowhere in its waters. She’s Rini, daughter of the former pupil Sumi, who was killed in Every Heart a Doorway: due to the nature of Nonsense worlds, Sumi was able to give birth to a daughter before she died (and even before she was old enough to become a mother, at that), but now that Rini has become aware of her mother’s demise, she’s becoming the victim of entropy and disappearing bit by bit.  Asking and obtaining the help of her mother’s fellow students, Rini proceeds to recover Sumi’s bones from the Halls of the Dead – where we meet again Nancy, happily back in her role as a fleshy statue – and then moves to her home world of Confection to find Sumi’s heart and soul and make her whole again, so that Rini can go on living.

Confection is a world entirely made of sugar, gingerbread and candy, but it hides a darker side because of the Queen of Cakes’ cruel rule, as she tries to bend reality to her own twisted desires; the Queen’s attempt to stop the group of friends from attaining their goal proves to be one of the biggest obstacles in their quest, and it almost costs them dearly, but still it’s not enough to imbue the story with the kind of drama that is this series’ trademark.

The spun-sugar and candy nature of Confection might have been an attempt to lighten the mood of the series, and the group’s adventures – despite the seriousness of the almost-impossible task they set themselves to – follow a strange, outlandish pattern that looks more confused than anything else and robs it of much of the urgency inherent in the quest itself: Rini’s piecemeal disappearance and her need to have her mother back feel more like narrative devices than the emotional signposts they should be, and I never truly felt any commitment to the kids’ mission or its final outcome.

If the narrative somewhat suffers from this change of tone, losing some of the smoothness I have come to expect from Seanan McGuire’s works, the characters fare no better: with the exception maybe of Christopher, about whom we learn a little more, the other “old hands” see practically no evolution in the course of the story, and the new ones like Cora become mere allegories for the issues the author wants to explore, which is a change of pace and intensity in McGuire’s usual way to address them.   Until now I have always admired the way in which this writer choose to discuss important topics like diversity, perception of self, and so on, in a way that never felt preachy or heavy-handed, just laying down the basics and leaving to the readers the welcome task of thinking about them.    Here though, Cora has to deal with the fact that she’s overweight and has always been stigmatized and mistreated because of it: this detail is mentioned practically every time she is the p.o.v. character, so that instead of being an issue that should lead us to deeper considerations, it becomes an annoying repetition that adds nothing to Cora’s psychological makeup as a person and in the end makes her appear as whiny, and shallow.   

I missed the effortless dignity with which Seanan McGuire usually tackles the matters she cares about and drives home her message, and I believe this is one of the reasons I enjoyed Beneath the Sugar Sky less than I expected and less than it deserved.  My hope is that this might be just a small bump along the road and that the next installments in this series will return to the kind of quality I’ve come to associate with this author.

My Rating: 

12 thoughts on “Review: BENEATH THE SUGAR SKY (Wayward Children #3), by Seanan McGuire

  1. Ah that’s a shame, I LOVED the previous installment for their quiet, eerie and atmospheric feel… This one sounds liked it was a bit rushed maybe? McGuire’s characters usually are a bit more layered. Anyway, I will still read this one but I will lower my expectations! Great review, as always! 😉

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  2. A good review, Maddalena. It’s inevitable with a prolific author that there is some variation – particularly as it sounds like McGuire is attempting something a bit different here. I hope the next one is back to her usual excellent standard.

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    1. And so do I…
      It’s not as if this author is unable to work with humor – as her Incryptid series shows with success – it’s just that here the mood feels… off, somehow.
      Crossing fingers for the next one 🙂


  3. I have to admit, I was a little surprised to see a less than 4 star rating for a Seanan Mcguire book from you, but I understand why from reading your review, and I guess an occasional dip in a series can make one appreciate the higher points even more 🙂 Sometimes I like lighter moods, but I can also see how a switch from the darker, atmospheric tones of the previous installments can be quite jarring.

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    1. I keep telling myself that McGuire must not have been her usual focused self as she was writing this one, or maybe she wanted it be something different but the… baking did not go well, just to remain on topic 🙂
      Still, I will look forward for her next one…


  4. I skimmed your review since I’m still behind on this series (haven’t read book 2 yet!), but I’m sorry to see that it didn’t live up to your expectations. McGuire’s definitely better at dark stories in my opinion, so I’m not necessarily surprised.

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